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The Vagrant of the Seas

Like a drowned angel
imprinted on a timeless crystal shard
I saw her suspended there,
flowing tendrils sweeping past
and rainbow pearls clinging to her hair.
As I approached, she lovingly beckoned;
ivory arms soflty outstretched in the air.
What have I ever done to deserve
the affections of a vision such as fair?
For my soul her eyes did much
to entangle and beguile,
but only the closer I came
to that perfect diaphanous frame
did I notice that terrible hungry smile...

Quicksilver swift
she had me wrapped in a pinch
within her bowels of pulsing pain.
Nevermore shall I wander freely
throughout the world above again.

And now, as I feel my flesh slowly melting away
with my failing eyes I see
the glowing face of my fatal love
grinning back sweetly.

With just one look this swimming siren
reduced me to my knees
and for my folly here I shall I forever remain;
alongside my beloved vagrant of the seas.

EDIT: My thanks go to :iconregless: :iconwaddle-penguin: and :iconacrimsonrose: for their advice on how to improve the picture. It looks so much better now!
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Lovely pic and lovely poem :D

Love the gradient effect on the background to give the image the illusion of depth. Love the character especially her colouring!

Great job :hug:

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BONIIIITAAA! Wonderful job, Val! ^-^
You could make the top lighter though in the bg so that the lady stands out more. The values are close to one another so she nearly gets lost in the bg but not completely.

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Thanks for the fave and advice, Rose! As you can see, I tried it out and it turned out much better than I could have hoped (although I also kept a version of the darker one, because I still like it that way)! :hug: Thankies!

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Thank you ever so much for commenting! :love:

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\"To argue with a person who has renounced the use of reason is like administering medicine to the dead.\" Thomas Paine
This picture is most beautiful. The detail is very nice, I like it very much. :D

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