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Finding me, Finding you

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Finding me, Finding you

Please, My Love.
Don't try to take away my pain; you can't.
Don't try to provide me shelter from the rain; you shant.
In truth, to me it is all the same
on whose shoulders it is right to place the blame
for the shortcomings of my own weak heart and mind
and subtle breaking with the passing time
is fault of none other than myself,
for archiving my emotions
on an invisible shelf.
But to you, my dear, I owe my life itself
for teaching me the things in which I alone dared not delve.
What it really means to be loved, you see
was as alien to me as the desert's kiss is to the sea.
But in finding you, I have also found me.
Thank you for showing me
all that I was too blind to see.
Here's my baby!

It was written for my sweetheart nary a month or 2 ago. Or rather, it was inspired by him. Yeah, that sounds right to me.
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vigilantlywaiting's avatar
Great job. I love the metaphors and wording. Very artistic and meaningful. Keep it up.